三单 -s 不稳(持续):"First, she wash her hands" → washes(同节 "she eats" 对了)。
动名词:"Fist is hold your hand..." → holding(is to hold 也行)。
be used for + doing:"The trick used for can't remember the month" → is used for remembering。
冠词:"she eats at table" → at the table;"I roll a dough" → the dough(dough 不可数)。
存疑(转写噪音大,不进错题本正文):写话练习疑似把 February 归为 groove month;"November has 31 months"(自纠为 days,不记);"January/December" 两处疑似 February 的转写误听(老师都回了 very good,应为转写问题,未据此下结论)。
三源交叉(老师评语):老师说已掌握 fist / leap year / March、待提升 February——转写对得上:fist("I have two")、leap year("366 days in the leap year")、March("March has 31 days" 自发两次)都进了她的自造句;February 她内容全说对(29 days、but 长句),老师仍点名需加强——结合预习稿"Feb-ru-a-ry 四音节慢慢念"的预警,判断为发音问题(转写无法验证发音,如实说明,未硬下结论)。评分:词汇语法 70 / 发音 90 / 专注 80 / 理解 70——"理解 70"与卡点 1(复杂问句听 4 遍)互相印证。
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课程信息:2026年10月10日 · Level 3 Unit 3《时间 Time》Lesson 6《A Cool Trick 炫酷小窍门》· 外教 Shaibel · 19:30–19:55 · 转写共 395 段 判断口径:照三条铁律——只有她自发造的句子才计入能力;跟读、复述课文、复述老师示范的都不计入。宁可低估,不高估。本课是阅读理解课(故事线),自发长句机会天然少,不与词汇课直接比句数。 课型说明:本课围绕 Timmy 学"拳头数月法"(knuckle month 31 天 / groove month 30 天 / February 特殊),预习稿 ⭐ 必掌握:① First... Then... ② fist / knuckle / groove ③ February / leap year。
一、「自己造」的句子(按时间顺序,原话+时间戳)
短答类(3–6 词,答问自发):
[00:03:31] "They are starting cool tricks."(看图描述)
[00:06:45] "I have two."(答 How many fists)
[00:07:56] "March has 31 days."(干净)
[00:09:32] "It is February."(干净)
[00:10:50] "There are 366 days in the leap year."(答几天)
[00:14:26] "It's 30 days."(答 groove month 几天)
[00:18:45] "Let me count."(自发,数 March 天数前)
[00:18:50] "So March has 31 days."(数完宣布)
[00:21:53] "February has 29 days."(干净)
[00:22:50] "April."(从 January 数到 April 作答——会用数数策略找答案)
[00:25:46] "No, no, no. This is false."(答 Is it true)
完整句类(自己组装,8 词以上或带从句/并列):
[00:07:00] "Fist is hold your hand into a circle."(答 what is fist;→ holding)
[00:14:12] "If a groove month, it is 30 days."(自造,内容对)
[00:16:16] "The trick used for can't remember the month."(答 trick 是干嘛的;→ remembering)
[00:18:24] "First make your hands into fists."(答第一步;First... 句型 ✓)
[00:21:28] "I don't think February is a special month for me, but I think February is a special month for everyone on the earth."(答 February 对你特殊吗;but 并列 22 词一次到位——本节最高光)
[00:24:15] "First, she wash her hands."(First...Then... 看图造句;→ washes)
[00:24:22] "she eats at table."(→ at the table;eats 三单对了)
[00:24:40] "First, I roll a dough."(→ the dough,dough 不可数)
[00:24:44] "Then, I bake the bread in the oven."(干净 ✓)
[00:26:33] "We start to count at the left hand's little finger's knuckle."(答从哪开始数;词是 chunk,说成了 knuckle——见错题本)
组装失败但自发的(只记错题本,不计入能力):
[00:14:05] "If a chunk of month, it is 31 days."(→ knuckle month;同款 "chunk" 错误本节共 4+ 次)
[00:17:21] "Each chunk of month has 31 days..."(→ knuckle)
写话练习(高脚手架,老师带着写):疑似把 February 归为 groove month(转写噪音大,"group month has 28 days",存疑,待验证)
二、哪个 chunk / 句型用对了(对照预习稿 ⭐)
First... Then... 从预习稿走进嘴里——本节最大收获:面包制作 "First, I roll a dough. Then, I bake the bread in the oven."(第19–20句)两句连发全对;写话 "First, make your hand into fist. Then start count...";答步骤 "First make your hands into fists." 一节 3 次活用,句型活了。
fist / groove 用对:"I have two [fists]"、"a groove month";knuckle 翻车——全程说成 "chunk"(词卡认读、造句、写话,4+ 次),老师当场纠 3 次、下课专门留 knuckle 发音作业。旧词干扰新词:她的"语块库"就叫 chunks。
February / leap year 进了自造句:"February has 29 days"、"There are 366 days in the leap year"、最高光的 but 长句——内容全对。
否定前置新句型:"I don't think February is..."——第一次自发用 I don't think,值得记。
三、卡点(3例)
复杂问句听不懂,要问 4 遍:[00:21:05–21:28] 老师 "Why is February special for you?" 她连回 "What? / Pardon? / What? / What month?",老师换成 "Is February special month for you?" 才听懂作答。老师评分"理解 70%"实锤——不是单词问题,是问句结构稍复杂就掉线。
三单 -s 不稳(持续):"First, she wash her hands" → washes(同节 "she eats" 对了)。
动名词:"Fist is hold your hand..." → holding(is to hold 也行)。
be used for + doing:"The trick used for can't remember the month" → is used for remembering。
冠词:"she eats at table" → at the table;"I roll a dough" → the dough(dough 不可数)。
存疑(转写噪音大,不进错题本正文):写话练习疑似把 February 归为 groove month;"November has 31 months"(自纠为 days,不记);"January/December" 两处疑似 February 的转写误听(老师都回了 very good,应为转写问题,未据此下结论)。
三源交叉(老师评语):老师说已掌握 fist / leap year / March、待提升 February——转写对得上:fist("I have two")、leap year("366 days in the leap year")、March("March has 31 days" 自发两次)都进了她的自造句;February 她内容全说对(29 days、but 长句),老师仍点名需加强——结合预习稿"Feb-ru-a-ry 四音节慢慢念"的预警,判断为发音问题(转写无法验证发音,如实说明,未硬下结论)。评分:词汇语法 70 / 发音 90 / 专注 80 / 理解 70——"理解 70"与卡点 1(复杂问句听 4 遍)互相印证。
五、3个最棒瞬间(只挑自己造的,爸爸可直接夸)
[00:21:28] "I don't think February is a special month for me, but I think February is a special month for everyone on the earth."——but 并列 22 词长句一次到位,还特别幽默(对地球上每个人都特殊)。全场最佳,"I don't think" 也是第一次自发用。
[00:22:58] "April has 31 days." → "Oh no, no, 30 days, 30 days."——说错自己抓回来改对,没人提醒。自我监控上线了(同场还有 "November has 31 months → 31 days")。
[00:24:40–44] "First, I roll a dough. Then, I bake the bread in the oven."——昨天预习稿的 ⭐ 句型,今天课堂上活学活用,两句连发。预习→课堂的闭环第一次这么顺。
六、本节一句话总结
First... Then... 从预习稿走进嘴里(一节 3 次活用),自纠正上线 2 次,but 并列长句证明她"能说长";代价是 knuckle 全程说成 chunk(4+ 次,老师下课留了发音作业)、复杂问句要听 4 遍才懂(理解 70 实锤)。vs 10/08:10/08 的最大进步是过去式 2 次用对,本节是句型活用 + 自我监控;代词 she 本节全对(Lily is a girl / she eats),无回潮;spend to do 本节无语境、未再犯。输出耐力仍是主瓶颈,但课型是阅读课,不算退步。